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Friday, September 14, 2012

Untitled:When Doing Your Best

When doing your best
Don’t except too much
Getting blown away
Excepting do more
Hurting your pride
Just hold it all in
Excepting some more
When doing your best
Do them a favor
Don’t hurt feelings
Excepting too much
For no cost no price Over your limits
When doing your best
Excepting mo more
Pushing your up most
Going that extra mile
When doing your best

Poem # 40
Idea May 20 / 21

Rewritten


When you don your best
They expect too much
Over your limit
They expect do more
Do them a favor
Don’t hurt their feelings
They expect some more

Just hold it all in
Expect too much
For the cost no price
Pushing your up most
When you do your best
Going that extra mile
Getting blown away
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When you do your best

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