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Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Every Thing Seems: Feelings

Everything seems so strange
When I get this swift chill
Why do I feel this way?
Only if you could hear
Violence in the streets up head
My bones shiver like cold
A sudden explosion
Crying, smooth sensations
Just hear my hear bounding
But, only if you could
Every thing seems by far
Just thoughts I can’t express
Not now, even later
Have you had this feeling?
It lingers in your mind
Thoughts I can not explain

Poem # 24
Idea March 28/31 April 24

RewrittenChanged Title

Feeling
Everything seems so strange

When I get this swift chill
Why do I feel this way?
Violence in street up head
My bones shiver like cold
Strong roar makes goose bumps
Felling that last until….
A sudden explosion
Cry out smooth sensations
Just hear my heart bounding
But only if you could
Everything seems by far
Just my thoughts, I can’t express
Not now, even later
But only however
If it lingers in yours,
Thoughts can only explain

WrittenNovember 13, 1991
Poem # 25 is rewritten on Poem # 5

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