Just Wait :ReWrite

Passing slowing in his bed
Watching the birds
Fly over his head
Take the jinks out
Just take it out
He has done
The best he could
Just like anyone would
Just look at all his people
Look at all his people
Just wait let them be
Just wait by the sea

Poem # 21 Idea March 17
Rewrite Poem # 7 Rewrite March 17

Just Wait
Passing slowly
In his bed
Watching the birds
Fly over head
Take the jinks out
Just take it out
He has done
The best he could
Just look at
His people
Loot at all
His people
Just wait let them be
Just wait, by the sea